User talk:Dkkoch
Dear Dkkoch,
Thank you very much for your proofreading of the Valera Fisher Allen page. I will help you mark it as complete once it seems finished. I just wanted to make you aware of some inadvertent mistakes. Here the page template {{page|52|file=In_Memoriam_1992....}} was moved, this template should stay in the same place because it marks where exactly the break in the text is. Here some phrases and text were deleted that still appeared in the text: Valera Fisher Allen, this was part of an image caption and should be preserved because it can be useful to search image captions. To identify it as a caption and not regular text you can italicize it. Val’s first trip out of Africa was to go on pilgrimage, where she had the bounty of and also Dale and [mm Allen at the end should have been kept, edited to Dale and Irma Allen and if you wanted to indent it you can add a colon before the line like this
:Dale and Irma Allen